script update

we haven't filmed the interview scene yet but we thought that the script was too long for the scene and that some of the dialogue was unnecessary. this is our new shortened version:

Interviewer: So you were spotted outside one stop at 7:03pm. Had you seen Nadine earlier in the day?

Kate: Yes. I was supposed to meet her at 6.30 but she didn’t meet me till 6.45 because she’d just had an argument with her boyfriend.

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Interviewer: People said they heard raised voices, shouting and then screams. You were then shortly spotted outside one stop. (Looks down at papers) The body was found at 8:00pm (looks back up), and passer-by identified the suspect with a description matching yours.

Kate: Well I was already home by then. My next door neighbour had to press the buzzer to let me i…

*knock knock*
-assistant walks in-

Assistant: I have your, uh, papers and you have an urgent message.

Interviewer:  Just leave them on the desk. This won’t take long.